CletusJohannes's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SAMURI PAT]

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Pretty good, I like the details on the right arm and how you played with the light and shadow tones, but I think you can work a bit more on the drapery. For that I recomend you a book called "Dynamic wrinkles and drappery" by Burne Hogarth, It helped me a lot. Its available on amazon if you are interested.

Keep up the good work.

wolfternus responds:

no it hasn't

[Dreads]

Akira!

It really reminds me of Tetsuo. I am curious to know what aspect of your life you are portraying.

[Elaborado y contrastante]

Yeahs

Me gusta como pero creo que habri que centrar un poco mas al personaje, si es este al que quieres resaltar, por esto mismo siento el dibijo un poco desbalanceado. Por la misma cuestion parece como si quisieras resaltar el barril.
Creo que tambien podrias trabajar en los bordes de la sobmra morada del barril del lado derecho, que se ven un poco inconsistentes tal vez el borde de esta misma sombra del lado izquierdo es lo que me confunde.

Pero una me agrada bastante el efecto que logras con colores solidos, pero es un muy buen dibujo para ser autodidacta

iter-intergalactic responds:

Muchas gracias !
Tomaré en cuenta tus sugerencias la próxima vez que vectorize

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Chido!

Me agradan bastante los colores, y el concepto es sensacional. Me agrado como en tus trabajos tienes un estilo muy definido y bastante interesante.

iter-intergalactic responds:

Muchas gracias
Este dibujo es muy viejo , pero tiene algo que hace que todavia me guste
y de fondo le puse una foto que tomé uno de mis colores favoritos, el verde

[Dogs Life]

I am so jealous

I love your style, you are a source of inspiration to me. Though about this piece, I can only say that colour pencils seem to light, and they dont really seem solid, though I noticed you did some tone shading, which in my opinion would look astonishingly better if you had a bigger tone range, like darker shading. Though I may be wrong and this is what you attempted anyways keep it up

UnderARock responds:

Wow thanks a ton. On some parts I couldnt really make the shading darker, but on the brown parts I definatly could have, I guess ill have to practice more with it on my next drawing.

[Hamish]

Nice

I like the light and shading you used, I guess you anly need abit more light on the cheeks, cause otherwise they look pretty flat. Dont take me wrong cause I didnt overlook you, but the shirt and the neck look like you were a bit lazy about those parts so all the work you did on the face fades away as you look around the rest of the picture, butits nothing to worry about I am just saying you could improove the effect you give by simply paying the same attention to all the details.

mrbob0822 responds:

Thanks for the critique.

The way I do a lot of quick portraits like this is by investing more time and detail the face and letting the level of detail taper off through the rest of the piece. This way the eye is drawn to where there's more detail. I'd rather have people stare at his face, which is more unique than his clothing.

That defense aside, I do appreciate the critique, despite that being my original intent. :3